Coming Forth

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  • Love
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  • Death
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  • Devotion
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  • Passion

    Poem Commentary

    This how I feel now thanks to my bf that I love deeply. He saved me from the hurt I had before.

    Coming Forth

     To see the light
    warm and bright
    to leave the darkness
    cold and alone
    to see the happiness
    the joy all in all
    on how I feel
    It maybe called
    for what I leave behind
    to what I'm going to
    to start a new
    happy and revived
    the emptiness has gone
    so has the hurt
    the pain I had
    was healed by you
    the touch so gentle
    the sound so sweet
    the taste so rich
    I wonder how this was missed.

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    Artie commented on Coming Forth

    04-18-2010

    You describe your feelings very well. This piece really shows your passion - 10 from me
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