Lost love

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    Lost love

    In my heart you play this game
    you smash my walls and then abandon me
    when i'm near you the darkness that crowds my heart is gone
    the light you gave it can show
    but then back to the confussion
    back to the endless dark
    it wouldn't hurt so much
    if you wouldn't push me away
    what happened to the friendship we shared
    the lives that we lead
    all I ask from you is not to push me away
    how can I recover from the damaged you have done
    it might seem little but is not
    how can I hide the pain behind my walls
    when I have none against you
    nothing to hide the torcher in my eyes
    the pain in my voice
    i'll say this here
    you smashed the walls to my heart
    if your going to push me away when I just want to be friends
    how can the times come again
    I dont know if you see
    the love in my eyes
    the pain in my heart
    the endless times we didn't share
    well I know nothing else to say.

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    RettaJ commented on Lost love

    10-29-2009

    pushing away the ones we love most is the hardest thing in the world to do

    Artie commented on Lost love

    10-22-2009

    I agree with pocket - well done for your age - relationships never get easier lol

    pocketofdreams6 commented on Lost love

    10-22-2009

    Oh the poetry from a 16 year old female, I must say very good for your age, it kind of brought me back to when I was 16.... Although there is immense sadness through this poem, I think that one day when you're like 30 and you look back at this poem, you will probably laugh! Oh the beauty of time, which time is the cure!

    shortie13086 commented on Lost love

    10-21-2009

    wow i can really relate to this poem, its very emotional and very well written keep up the good work!

    cliftondurant commented on Lost love

    10-20-2009

    Why anyone want to push you away i tell you it's there lost great job and heartfelt

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