Crimson Finch

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    Crimson Finch

    Flapping, Flying, Soaring high
    Dipping, Diving through the sky
    Enjoying the wind beneath her wings
    I listen whilst the crimson finch sings
    Sloping lower she shares her tune
    We trill the dawn ‘til the light of noon
    Parting as our hunger is heard
    I find myself longing
    to sing with a bird

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    BDIsernhagen commented on Crimson Finch

    06-11-2009

    It seems this poem could go to two different places, a nature poem, and someting deeper... good read!
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    Indigogreen16 commented on Crimson Finch

    06-11-2009

    sounds alittle like maya angelou's caged bird..... it is very well written, nice..............................
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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