Drowning

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    Drowning

    Cruel and uncompromising
    your heart, cold and hard
    as the diamond that graces my ring
    your need for attention
    could fill the grand canyon
    to the brim,
    forcing you to push everyone
    out of your boat,
    to drown beneath the water
    just so you can raise the level
    a tiny bit more

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    sincere commented on Drowning

    05-15-2009

    I can relate, I really like this one
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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