Upon a Grassy Knoll

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    Upon a Grassy Knoll

    In a grassy knoll we met
    Startled we jumped away
    I hope we meet again
    I wish to know you better one day

    Startled we jumped away
    Fears easing we turned back
    I hope we meet again
    As I gaze into your reflection

    Fears easing we turned back
    Undisturbed we ponder our life
    I gaze into your reflection
    It was nice to meet myself

    Undisturbed we ponder our life
    In a grassy knoll we met
    It was nice to meet myself
    I wish to know you better one day

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    Comerford commented on Upon a Grassy Knoll

    02-05-2010

    I also enjoy the readability of _your_ work. Here's an odd question, though, is this about a meeting with a fellow human, or an animal?
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    Indigogreen16 commented on Upon a Grassy Knoll

    06-11-2009

    very beautiful. thank you ireally enjoyed reading your work, it was my pleasure..... keep up the good work...........
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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