Without You

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  • Lost Love

    Without You

    While I look into the night
    with all the stars shining bright
    I dream of you right next to me
    sharing my love so naturally
    your presence a thing I cannot replace
    makes me worry of my fate
    I don't think I can go on
    without your love that making me strong
    we laugh and play from dawn ‘til dusk
    your presence has always been a must
    sitting here without you near
    I fear my eyes will tear
    to think of life and you not here
    the existence of me becomes unclear
    life without you there
    is life with no air

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    kpeery09 commented on Without You

    03-23-2010

    Love is truly something that we all can have or need and when we love someone and they are far away from you, we tend on thinking what if they were here with us, what would we be doing now. Very Nice poetic verse of what I said, I give you 10
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    nook commented on Without You

    06-10-2009

    i like that........ It was extremely deep and you didnt even have to write a super long poem to get your point across..... very short, to the point and very good!!!!!
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    LadiTrouble22 commented on Without You

    06-10-2009

    AWWWWWWWWW I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM IT MADE ME CRY REALLY BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES IM BOUT TO READ MORE OF YO POEMS IM LOOKIN FORWARD TO READIN THEM....
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    sincere commented on Without You

    05-15-2009

    I don't know who rated u so low but you get high scores from me.
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    cynthiakehl commented on Without You

    05-15-2009

    punctuation is as important as the words.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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