Desiring You

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Desiring You

let me taste your innocense
let me deep within
let me probe the depths
where our new life will begin
let me feel your tenderness
caress just brow to brow
lost so deep inside your eyes
I feel you all just now

I crawled full length inside your skin
I stopped to look around
so much to be devoured
may I eat my way out now
so much to be desired
so much to be taken in
so much to experiance
this rainbow has no end

the temperture is increasing
your heart can take this load
I'll take you far beyond the end
it'll rain when you explode
join me on this journey
say yes and we'll begin
poetry all has meaning
just add me as your friend

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cherrymccloud commented on Desiring You

08-13-2010

very nicely said..it reminds me of somethings I would say or do. welcome to orignal poetry...looking forward to reading more on you

ApaqRasgirl commented on Desiring You

08-06-2010

ok well if I can share in all that steamy, fiery passion and desire you have then yessssssss, I gladly be your friend........lol.......loved it, hot little write.........thanks loves ya asha

JadedJezzabel commented on Desiring You

08-06-2010

very clever play on words.........true talet shows through..............awsome

texaswriter commented on Desiring You

08-05-2010

I think you should write a steamy romance novel! It will sell! Awesome read!

alreedus commented on Desiring You

08-03-2010

Nice. I love the way you write. I see a promise of trust about to become ripe -alan

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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