Empty Spaces

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  • paxtruth
  • Thinking about writing something new cause it's been a while.

Empty Spaces

A heart so true a face so fair
I remember how you looked standing there
The kindest eyes I'd ever seen
Vulnerable and tender so they seemed

But we were bound for different places
And all that's left are empty spaces
Spaces of distance and bridges burned
An empty heart and a back that was turned

You looked back once and never again
Betrayed your own heart believed a false friend
And now there are only memories
Like leaves falling from Autumn trees

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HopeOhlarik commented on Empty Spaces

04-13-2010

very well written, I could feel the pain from this piece. Good write, keep it up, writting is the best form I have found for easing pain.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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