My Funky Love Song

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    This was an exercise in rhyming. All of the first lines, second lines, and third lies rhyme.

    My Funky Love Song

     From the ends of the galaxy
    To the next universe
    Is how big my love for you is

    It's become a malady
    Pining for you's a curse
    But I like it cause it's you I miss

    I want to be your lady
    Have your picture in my purse
    And every night we'll have our tryst

    No there's nothing shady
    Nothing would be worse
    Than for you to think all I want's a kiss

    I know I would be crazy
    And it would be a curse
    Cause I see there's more to you than this

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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