father like son

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    father like son
    jumpin with joy..
    wondering why, all the sudden i wanna
    join the military,
    jump outta planes for a occupation,
    fighting and being a hard ass...

    its because im starting to be like my dad..

    this couldnt get any better.
    after eighteen long years of waiting...
    the time has come..

    like God returning to his people..

    my dad is coming to me...

    everybody bullshitted and kept me seperated from him..

    but, now their is nothing they can do...

    all i can do is cry,
    and be happy,

    nothing can make this feeling of joy go away..

    even if u tried..
    i would look at u..
    and think

    what a fuckin idiot...

    because now i get to meet him...
    my dad..

    im gonna be like him...
    im gonna be successful...
    im gonna be like my dad...

    father like son

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    beautifuldeath commented on father like son

    02-09-2009

    another wonderful write full of emotion. well done.
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