heartbroken

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    heartbroken
    sittin here in my room...
    layin on the ground...
    overcome with depression...

    wonderin if it will ever go away..
    pledging for help..
    crying.....

    why am i left for dead..
    walkin in the room....

    seeing her with him..
    i become overwhelmed with angry..

    so i charge...

    but as im charging i have decision... complications... conquences..

    so i stop...
    tell him ill be back for him later....

    later i walk up to him....
    face to face...

    destroyed...
    anxiody builds up...

    and i cant come to my senses....

    but with every i walk away...

    i walk up to her front step..
    KNOCK!!!!! KNOCK!!!!

    loooking her in the eyes i say

    GOOD BYE....
    while walkin away i think about all the time i had

    heart broken. i jus keep walkin as she call me to come back...


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    AshRenee commented on heartbroken

    06-03-2009

    This is a beautiful poem. So sad, but so strong. If this poem is about you, I'm sorry that you had to feel that pain, but you can write about it and now and rid yourself of the pain that way.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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