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  • Lost Love

    unpredictable
    lookin around...
    running down the street makin sure she's ok...

    Damn!!!!

    hold on...

    FREEEZE!!!!

    I stop my heart is pounding
    sweating..
    pain running thru my vains...

    don't go

    i see the bullet...

    oh shit!!!

    duck

    it missed me but, it hit her....

    no
    no
    no
    no

    this cant happen..

    crying...
    cant judge how bad it is...

    r u ok??
    please dont leave me...

    talk to me....

    ..........................
    .............................
    ...................................
    ......................................

    no words coming out....

    i run to tha car...
    get the sniper...

    i see my target...

    this is for u

    breathing....
    waiting....
    pause ...

    BOOM....
    bullet leaves the chamber...

    it hits the target but,

    i see darkness...

    everything is so unpredictable....

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    nateshelton28’s Poems (27)

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    fight for love 0 02/15/2009
    standed 0 02/15/2009
    tricked 1 02/15/2009
    does it feel right?? 0 02/15/2009
    dont cry it will be fine 0 02/15/2009
    inside out.... 0 02/15/2009
    gloomy day 1 02/13/2009
    extistances.. 2 02/11/2009
    final destination 1 02/09/2009
    wedding 1 02/09/2009
    taken part 2 the soga continues 1 02/09/2009
    why? {jus for the women out there} 2 02/09/2009
    heartbroken 1 02/09/2009
    solitary confinement 0 02/09/2009
    stability 0 02/09/2009
    my heart 0 02/09/2009
    jus a little bit 0 02/09/2009
    internal bleeding 1 02/09/2009
    short fuse eruption 1 02/09/2009
    i have what i want... 0 02/09/2009
    i am the cure 0 02/09/2009
    unpredictable 0 02/09/2009
    father like son 1 02/09/2009
    inconsiderate 0 02/09/2009
    addiction 2 02/09/2009
    THE DAY HE DIED 1 02/06/2009
    forbidden fruit part 2 0 02/06/2009
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