why? {jus for the women out there}

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    why? {jus for the women out there}
    ok...
    here we go?
    you wanna complain about a guy not treatin u right?
    you want to complain about a guy lying to u?
    you wanna complain about a guy not caring about u?
    and a guy cheating on u?

    but never the less u let him disrespect you
    you let him break you down
    and you let him run free and do what he wants..

    but have u ever thought about the guys in the world you dont give a chance..
    what about the guy who tries to do everything in his power to break your barriers down
    they guy who knows what he want to do in life...

    but u never look their way
    you never give them a chance..
    you tell them their jus a friend...

    never letting them show their true feeling
    never letting them show u how they can fulfill your every desire
    never letting them be their for u....

    only because their the guy you would never think of...

    so why say their nobody out their
    when u jus let them clear ur face..
    and keep it moving....
    why?

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    AshRenee commented on why? {jus for the women out there}

    06-03-2009

    Oh, honey, I'm so sorry. I could tell you that if that girl let you go, she was stupid. But I imagine you wouldn't fall for a stupid girl. I'm terribly sorry though, and I pray that everything works out for the best for you.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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