does it feel right??

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    does it feel right??

    how do u kno when it really feels right?
    when everything goes right and their no fighting?
    when you know their every....
    move?
    breathe?
    where abouts?
    what about when yall act like the same person?
    same likes?
    same dislikes?
    same everything....
    well maybe i have a different perspective
    how about when your heart beats a thousand times faster
    how about when your the only person they see in their eyes
    how about when they freeze up when u get around them
    well you think and im think
    the only real time when everything feels right is when
    you and the person you enjoy connect eyes and walk away
    into the unknown when all the trust in the world
    and when u kno they never goin to lie or cheat on you
    when u kno that they behind you when they never say a word
    that the only time u kno that it feels right
    so tell me
    how do u kno when it feels right?

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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    wedding 1
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    my heart 0
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    short fuse eruption 1
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    i am the cure 0
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    THE DAY HE DIED 1
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