tricked

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    tricked

    sitting here thinkin everything is fine
    but its really not
    u thought u had her
    u thought u scarficed everything
    and when its time to claim your prize its been
    stole....
    fallen hard for her hoping it will be okay...
    but its not
    everything u put into the relationship
    was a play action fake....
    walking down the street holding hands
    next min she with another guy
    haha funny
    that all u can do
    u were played like a new piano....
    why did u do it
    put your trust and u heart in it
    an all u get out of it is disappointment
    and failure....
    i really liked her and enjoyed her
    but now all i can do is look back
    and think
    did i jus get played???
    or did i jus get played and tricked?

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    AshRenee commented on tricked

    06-03-2009

    The ultimate reason for giving someone your heart and trust, is the love that comes from that. But if you never take a risk, that love isn't worth having when you finally find it. So, stuff like this is special and should be held with gratefulness that you had the opportuinity to learn what you did. You'll guard your heart more next time, and what's in it will be all the more precious.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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    extistances.. 2
    final destination 1
    wedding 1
    taken part 2 the soga continues 1
    why? {jus for the women out there} 2
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    stability 0
    my heart 0
    jus a little bit 0
    internal bleeding 1
    short fuse eruption 1
    i have what i want... 0
    i am the cure 0
    unpredictable 0
    father like son 1
    inconsiderate 0
    addiction 2
    THE DAY HE DIED 1
    forbidden fruit part 2 0