extistances..

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  • Sadness

    extistances..

    sitting in this room...
    LOST...
    questions pop into my brain..
    flowing from south to north like the nile river..

    was she really.. in
    LOVE?
    with me?

    i wish i could do it all over again..
    jus turn off the game..
    and press........
    RESET..

    start all over again..
    but,
    its not that easy..

    when she broke it off..

    i felt total obliteration..
    how am i suppose to feel...

    loving..
    to
    losing..
    to
    nothing..

    it makes me question my exitstance..

    why am i here..

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    Sx9 commented on extistances..

    04-20-2009

    real speak to ever one,,walk good
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    mmichelle97219 commented on extistances..

    02-13-2009

    Again not so poetic as there is no meter, but a beautifully sad monologue. Nice work. Michelle
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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