gloomy day

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    gloomy day

    once started.. magnificant..
    in a dream world.
    WHERE..
    nothing could possibly go wrong..
    then u wake up..
    to the sound of your alarm clock...
    DAMN IT!!!!
    you get up..
    jump in the shower hoping you will be on time...
    haha..
    wrong...
    now sitting on the couch waiting for your ride to get up..
    NOT HAPPENING!!
    three mins go by....
    five mins...
    ten mins...
    then your ready to leave for school..

    NOPE
    cars not warmed up yet...
    so you wait........
    more time goes by while u sit and hope something will go right...

    now in the car driving to school..
    then car runs outta gas...

    DAMN...]
    walking to school..
    three miles left to go..
    arriving at school..

    nothing else can go wrong..
    but, then,

    you get into a fight...
    now in handcuffs..

    thinking its a dream but, you pinch yourself..

    WRONG AGAIN!!

    from a good day to a bad day...
    it aint nothing but,
    a gloomy day

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    mmichelle97219 commented on gloomy day

    02-13-2009

    Itis not very poetic as there is no meter, and evn free verse needs a good readable beat. It does work though as a piece of performacne art.I can just see it being performed on stage at a Spoken Word Concert. Nice job. Michelle

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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