girl across the room

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    girl across the room

    Looking across the room and you know what i see
    a lonely girl staring right back at me
    She's a beautiful girl but she looks so sad
    As if she wants something that she once had
    She doesn't speak but i know what she means
    Like i'm connected to her with every ounce of my being

    She looks down at herself grimacing at what she sees
    For she only see her flaws and alot of these
    She stares blankly ahead..
    Smothered by this feeling..this feeling that she's dead

    She's wondering why she never thought she was pretty enough
    Why loving herself has been so tough
    Why she's always been told that she wasn't smart enough
    why her childhood was so damn rough..
    why she's been hurt by everyone she trusts
    why getting back at them has become a must

    why her family is the target of her despise
    maybe because they are the reason for her demise
    She looks at me and starts to cry..
    Tears filled with so much pain are rolling down her eyes..

    She's so disappointed i n herself...in everyone
    she screams HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME??
    I'm your girlfriend your daughter your grandaughter your friend your cousin
    why am i not worthy of your love? am i really just another one in a dozen?
    She thinks to herself i guess it doesn't matter anyways i've made up my mind, Now i'll never have to ask myself why..
    and that is because i have decided to die

    I run to her
    But it's to late shes withering away shes already a blur
    I punch the wall wondering how can this be???
    Then suddenly i realize that the girl is.....
    ME

    To Be Continued

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    KeithAColeman commented on girl across the room

    02-21-2014

    From your poems I can tell you have a few novels in you as well. you truly get the feeling that your in a story.

    monae commented on girl across the room

    09-12-2010

    U BETTA WK.. THIS IS GOOD AS H3LL!*.. CONTINUE 2 DO WRTE..

    concience commented on girl across the room

    11-14-2009

    ok- i see you. for you to be so young- you spit hard! thats sum sxy shh..! keep da pen moving!

    NayInLove

    12/16/2009

    thanks hun! :)

    Anthwayne commented on girl across the room

    08-07-2009

    I ALWAYS LIKE READIN UR POEMS THEY REMIND ME OF MINES, THEY KEEP ME GUESSIN.

    Rocetman commented on girl across the room

    08-04-2009

    the feeling that flows from you pen is intense. Your writing always makes me, (or should I say takes me.) inside it, like a movie, I do love your talent! I love feeling what is written so well, from some one I havent met. It leaves like a mystery cloud on my mind! such good writing, thanks for sharing your talent!

    NayInLove

    08/04/2009

    Thank you! your too sweet :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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