In my bed

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    In my bed
    This is my initiation challenge from bfoibus. Hope you like

    Laying on my bed, Passion in my eyes
    There's something in me that I just can't hide
    What's so exciting, what im dying to see
    Is your beautiful body
    Even though it's the same as me

    I crawl on top of you, and lick my lips
    all the while fondling those suculent tits
    My hands move from your stomach to your thighs
    I play with your clit, it's warm and wet
    what a nice surprise

    Then something comes over me in a hurry, in haste
    your sweet juices I just have to taste
    so down i go..
    and whats about to happen i'm sure you already know

    My tongue circles and swirls
    I've always had a thing for eating out girls
    My fingers move in and out
    Showing you baby what i'm all about

    Your body shakes
    It's to much for you to take
    You explode in my mouth like an enormous earthquake
    you smile
    I grin
    glad that i've made love love to a she and not a him


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    shultz commented on In my bed

    01-11-2011

    you put M in modern woman, this is a beautiful art of work, you creation its awesome 10 from me
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    phatdaddee commented on In my bed

    07-05-2009

    I don't know who bfoibus is but he/she/it is my new hero! Who or whatever got you to write this deserves a round of applause! Is that a tear rolling down my cheek?! (Smile)
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    KeithAColeman

    02/21/2014

    Lol

    Romano commented on In my bed

    06-15-2009

    diverse and erotic as if i was watching a movie of two souls on a mission, it is definitly different yet true
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    FX777222999 commented on In my bed

    04-18-2009

    Just for adults only...
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    BrokenHearted commented on In my bed

    04-14-2009

    your wrk is awesome im speechless with thi one u r the shit
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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