Glorious, Wonderful....

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    Simply contemplating the value of a certain relationship I have with a very dear, intelligent and Godly person...

    Glorious, Wonderful....

    Just as you have extended
    Your open arms to me…

    I invite you into my legacy
         No one knows why
    And it is never to be told
    And no one will ever know you 
               As I do
     
    You will remain
    One of the captors of my heart
    Despite my resistance
    Your influence doth depart

    From Him into you it flows into me
    And from Him into me I flow into you. 

    Glorious, wondrous God that you are

    ©6272010719pJeanMarie

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    devaamido commented on Glorious, Wonderful....

    07-10-2010

    "... He & I flow into you"??... and... "God Who is in Us". "He" alone can't be God unless you are too, or God includes you or transcends both. Excellent poem despite my quibble.
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    jeanpnkldyg

    07/10/2010

    I see what you are saying...it does need tweeking - thanks!

    ginga commented on Glorious, Wonderful....

    07-10-2010

    jean, I love the uplifting aura that surrounds each carefully chose word. Your joy shines through. ginga
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    jeanpnkldyg

    07/10/2010

    Thank you for taking time to read.

    dahlusion commented on Glorious, Wonderful....

    07-08-2010

    Oh, God, oh, yes, yes! A poetic pearl in all of its brilliance. Bravo!!
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    jeanpnkldyg

    07/08/2010

    merely a reflection of what surrounds me : )

    jeanpnkldyg commented on Glorious, Wonderful....

    07-07-2010

    Tried to edit - post submission. I should have said: 'From Him into you He (not it) flows into me.......hope you get the intent.
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