I REMEMBER!!

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I REMEMBER!!

I remember the holding, legs gently unfolding, from being intertwined in a mass of soft curves.

The “I want you”s, “I love you”s, “I cant wait to hug you”s and many more immaculate words.

The “ooohs” and the “aahhs”, should be cheers and applause, for the things I remember on these hot sleepless nights.

Like the “I miss you so much”es and those special place touches and I wont name the place If, by you, that’s alright!

I remember your embrace, and the smile on your face, as I carry you, effortlessly, off to my bed.

When I taste your sweet lips you, start to moan when I kiss you, as thoughts of your nakedness echo off in my head.

The things that come first, and what follows next, are enough to cause a grown man to weep.

The thing that’s a curse, is that without sex, I don’t think that we could lie down and just sleep.

As I taste you and tease you, in an effort to please you, your body starts trembling out of control.

I remember your leg shaking, and your teeth gently raking, my neck, as I penetrate deep in your soul.

The passion enflames, from our erotic games, and the bed sheets and pillows are caught up in the blaze

The give and the take, as we each please our mate, is a rhythmic tempest that is sure to amaze.

The fire rages on, from dawn to dusk and then dawn, until all that is left is a warm bright orange ember.

Yet this sort of stuff, as if being without you isn’t enough, on those dark lonely nights are the things I remember.

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Tempestlady commented on I REMEMBER!!

10-10-2011

Wow! What a wonderful mental and emotional rollercoaster. It was a fast flow and great rhythm and rhyme and the innuendo is so that the reader is coaxed to read between the lines filling in the unknown with their own. A fantastic experience. Write on.......Tlady.

phatdaddee

10/15/2011

Thank you Tlady! I'm glad you took the time to read this. I hope you read some wonderful thoughts in between those lines!! Lol!

LadyLuck commented on I REMEMBER!!

10-28-2010

When we are alone is when our favorite hottest memories come to mind and make the missing them worse

phatdaddee

10/28/2010

Truer words have never been spoken!

AbysmalGoddess commented on I REMEMBER!!

08-07-2009

I love the rhyme patterns in this, and your words are so fluid...they are tickled with eroticism and tease, very nicely done.

phatdaddee

01/03/2013

Thank you A.G. this poem was tickling my brain for awhile!!

RyneishaB commented on I REMEMBER!!

07-15-2009

Wow...this is awesome man...the passion in this poem has me oh so speechless...you are the MAN...lol...Great job very well said!!!! LOVED IT:)

phatdaddee

01/03/2013

I try really hard to be the man too! Lol! Naw I'm just being lil ole me!!

MsKrystle commented on I REMEMBER!!

07-07-2009

I like.....this is what I picked as my first choice to read and I think I made a good choice....Almost sounds like something i would write...the rhythm I mean. Very good write...mind if I put it in my secret stash of favs.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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