A Wedding Toast

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    A Wedding Toast

    To the Bride and Groom, for the people whom, this toast was put together.
    May you both know and your action show, that this love will be forever.
    May God strengthen you, as you take two, and merge them into one.
    One heart, one love, one perfect union, your new life has begun.
    May you embrace, each lonely place the others heart may go,
    And hold them where, in great despair, the tides toss to and fro.
    Where He for She and Her for Him, is all that truly matters.
    When it’s she or you, it comes down to, PLEASE don’t focus on the latter.
    God made this woman for you to love, yes you and you alone.
    When God began to create her, He took from you the bone.
    Like Adam’s rib, you have to give, yourself to make her whole.
    Your trust, your heart, your mind and body, maybe even the remote control.
    And with all this she must understand the power she has been given.
    Only to His Wife would he give his life, but she also must be driven .
    To please this man, doing all she can, to keep him standing strong.
    At the highest peak, with a ROAR in his lungs, is where this King belongs.
    So pick him up and dust him off whenever he has been beat up.
    And watch your tone, about the royal throne, when His Majesty leaves the seat up!
    Seriously, all you must do, the both of you, is think of the other’s feelings.
    You consider hers, you consider his, the results are so appealing.
    God blesses your family and honors your bond and delights in you from above.
    So raise up your glasses, here’s a toast from the masses, to the Bride and Groom’s undying love.

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    Lunabella commented on A Wedding Toast

    11-02-2012

    I find myself simply enchanted...thank you for sharing this *bows* -Luna

    phatdaddee

    11/07/2012

    My offereing pales in comparison to the poetic perfection your poem displayed.

    SecretAngel3 commented on A Wedding Toast

    10-11-2012

    Mind if I borrow this for the next I go to a wedding? ^_^

    SecretAngel3

    10/11/2012

    next time*

    phatdaddee

    10/23/2012

    Go for it!!

    DeniseCarol37 commented on A Wedding Toast

    09-13-2010

    Beautiful poem of an newly married couple and the start of a new martial life.

    phatdaddee

    09/15/2010

    I am ever so grateful that you took time out of your life to read something I've written. Thank you again!

    MarionYost commented on A Wedding Toast

    05-10-2010

    Sweetest poem I've EVER read, You get a 10 from me. (And I don't believe in "Marriage") Great poem! Keep it up all the best -Marion-

    phatdaddee

    05/19/2010

    Thank you so much for your opinion! I honestly do crave the feedback, it lets me know where I'm at in my writing. Thanks again!

    Samaria14 commented on A Wedding Toast

    09-07-2009

    LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this poem.... Perfect ten and ten again. This is deep on so many levels and it really defines the meaning of giving unselfishly. my fav line: Like Adam’s rib, you have to give, yourself to make her whole. Your trust, your heart, your mind and body, maybe even the remote control... If a man gives up the remote control, then he is the most generous man alive lol...... Excellant I'm in awe of you.

    phatdaddee

    09/08/2009

    Lol! God said that we should give, He may not have been speaking of the remote control though! I'm going to have to research that one!!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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