I Was Just Thinking......

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    I Was Just Thinking......

    I was just thinking...

    Would the world be a less happy place,
    If I didn't have you to embrace?

    And would my heart grow cold,
    Without you here to hold?

    Would the sun refuse to shine,
    If you were no longer mine?

    Would a rose lose all its glory,
    If you weren't a part of my story?

    Would I have so much fun,
    If our love came undone?

    Would I cease to exist,
    If I were scratched off your list?

    Would the moon shine so bright,
    Without you in my sight?

    Would I no longer care,
    If you weren't there?

    Would my heart skip a beat,
    Without you as my treat?

    These answers I hope I never know,
    Because I don't want you to go,

    But I was just thinking....

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    SecretAngel3 commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    10-11-2012

    Oh my God! I usually don't like love poetry, but the style and metaphors you use just sucked me in. It's not a soul-piercing thing. The title is perfect. Our lives aren't always so dramatic. Sometimes we just sit and ponder the possibilities....
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    phatdaddee

    11/07/2012

    Exactly!! You understand where I was coming from on this one. Thank you for reading and commenting. Any and all feedback is appreciated!

    joanna commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    03-09-2011

    I was just thinking .............. of what comment to write.......................
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    phatdaddee

    03/18/2011

    You don't even have to comment Jo thank you for just reading it!

    Ming commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    02-03-2011

    These are words I often think, but just don't know how to say face to face, I can write it, think it, recite it in a mirror, but I just can't bring myself to say it in her presence. Every time I try, my throat goes dry, and I choke. I guess I'm just scared ass chicken shit. -Ming
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    phatdaddee

    03/02/2011

    Lol! Ming, I'm only saying it in verse, as a poem! So I guess we're in the same chicken coop!

    JadedJezzabel commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    01-10-2011

    NICE POEM .......BUT STOP THINKING.....YOU COULD RUIN THE TIMES THAT SHOULD BE THE BEST TIMES OF YOUR LIFE.........I LOVE YOUR BROKEN SOUL BUDDY........
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    phatdaddee

    01/11/2011

    Thank you, I guess?! My broken soul loves yours right back!

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    12-30-2010

    Questions I have answered since my broken heart, and for while the answer is No, but then one day you wake up and the answer becomes yes again. I like this poem, it is cute:)
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    phatdaddee

    12/31/2010

    Simple plain thoughts. I agree with the cute comment too!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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