I Was Just Thinking......

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    I Was Just Thinking......

    I was just thinking...

    Would the world be a less happy place,
    If I didn't have you to embrace?

    And would my heart grow cold,
    Without you here to hold?

    Would the sun refuse to shine,
    If you were no longer mine?

    Would a rose lose all its glory,
    If you weren't a part of my story?

    Would I have so much fun,
    If our love came undone?

    Would I cease to exist,
    If I were scratched off your list?

    Would the moon shine so bright,
    Without you in my sight?

    Would I no longer care,
    If you weren't there?

    Would my heart skip a beat,
    Without you as my treat?

    These answers I hope I never know,
    Because I don't want you to go,

    But I was just thinking....

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    SecretAngel3 commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    10-11-2012

    Oh my God! I usually don't like love poetry, but the style and metaphors you use just sucked me in. It's not a soul-piercing thing. The title is perfect. Our lives aren't always so dramatic. Sometimes we just sit and ponder the possibilities....
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    phatdaddee

    11/07/2012

    Exactly!! You understand where I was coming from on this one. Thank you for reading and commenting. Any and all feedback is appreciated!

    joanna commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    03-09-2011

    I was just thinking .............. of what comment to write.......................
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    phatdaddee

    03/18/2011

    You don't even have to comment Jo thank you for just reading it!

    Ming commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    02-03-2011

    These are words I often think, but just don't know how to say face to face, I can write it, think it, recite it in a mirror, but I just can't bring myself to say it in her presence. Every time I try, my throat goes dry, and I choke. I guess I'm just scared ass chicken shit. -Ming
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    phatdaddee

    03/02/2011

    Lol! Ming, I'm only saying it in verse, as a poem! So I guess we're in the same chicken coop!

    JadedJezzabel commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    01-10-2011

    NICE POEM .......BUT STOP THINKING.....YOU COULD RUIN THE TIMES THAT SHOULD BE THE BEST TIMES OF YOUR LIFE.........I LOVE YOUR BROKEN SOUL BUDDY........
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    phatdaddee

    01/11/2011

    Thank you, I guess?! My broken soul loves yours right back!

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on I Was Just Thinking......

    12-30-2010

    Questions I have answered since my broken heart, and for while the answer is No, but then one day you wake up and the answer becomes yes again. I like this poem, it is cute:)
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    phatdaddee

    12/31/2010

    Simple plain thoughts. I agree with the cute comment too!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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