Phatville

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Just inviting one and all to come see how my brain functions!! Lol!

Phatville

Phatville

Smell the sweet aromas that come rolling down the hills

And then you know for sure that you have just entered Phatville!

There’s so much to enthrall you while the world is passing by!

See the smiling sun that sits up in the sapphire sky!

Have a heaping helping of some hope while passing through.

The amazing, artistic, arrangements are amassed here, just for you!

Sadness, gladness, madness, “Phatness”, fill up every lake,

Collected by the crazy clown who created this estate!

Open up your mind to all of the magical games we play!

I’m sure you’ll see some salacious, spectacular, sights along the way!

Please enjoy the sensuous, sweet, sensations all about!

Grab a gift of graciousness for guest on your way out!

Take the time to play inside my mental Gymboree!

Welcome to the wonderful, whimsical, world of Phatdaddee!!

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gmcookie commented on Phatville

01-14-2013

LOL... More structured verse! I love it. Between you and me and Slimwoodgoody it sort of makes you wonder what O.P. is coming to. Perhaps a renaissance of rhyme, a rebirth of rhythm? Who knows? But I like it!

phatdaddee

01/15/2013

Lol! I quiver at the mere thought of a takeover of such magnitude!

SecretAngel3 commented on Phatville

10-11-2012

I LOVE alliteration!!! It is one of my favorite literary devices. I love listing off adjectives for a single noun like you do here. It's a great way to make use of a large vocabulary. The one thing I don't understand is the last word.

phatdaddee

11/13/2012

Thanks for commenting once again and surely you jest about not understanding PHATS!! Lol!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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