I'll Dream of More

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She had a crush on me.

I'll Dream of More

I’ll Dream of More

Taronis – 2003 – for a young girl that thinks I’m kewl

 

I was once young and unsure

But I am a guy, and you are a gal

Could it be different, the uncertainty

The paths are numerous

The time seems boundless

 

I was once insecure and vexed

Insecure about what may be

Vexed by what was not

The paths open and wide

I strained to look beyond the bends

 

I felt much of what you feel

But differently from my eyes

You are a gal, and I am a guy

Could it be different, the uncertainty

Boundless at your age

 

I can offer only what I have learned

And hope to never misguide your step

So free, so young, a peppered sprite

Wide-eyed and hopeful

Bounded by my age

 

Oft thought fancies of my youth

Separated by two dozen years

A pity that, life’s cruel joke

I’ll offer my friendship

I’ll dream of more

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charles52 commented on I'll Dream of More

01-22-2010

ta: The fates can be mean. Great job of how love sometimes must be kept at a distance, and all we can do is dream. Charles

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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