I'll Dream of More

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She had a crush on me.

I'll Dream of More

I’ll Dream of More

Taronis – 2003 – for a young girl that thinks I’m kewl

 

I was once young and unsure

But I am a guy, and you are a gal

Could it be different, the uncertainty

The paths are numerous

The time seems boundless

 

I was once insecure and vexed

Insecure about what may be

Vexed by what was not

The paths open and wide

I strained to look beyond the bends

 

I felt much of what you feel

But differently from my eyes

You are a gal, and I am a guy

Could it be different, the uncertainty

Boundless at your age

 

I can offer only what I have learned

And hope to never misguide your step

So free, so young, a peppered sprite

Wide-eyed and hopeful

Bounded by my age

 

Oft thought fancies of my youth

Separated by two dozen years

A pity that, life’s cruel joke

I’ll offer my friendship

I’ll dream of more

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charles52 commented on I'll Dream of More

01-22-2010

ta: The fates can be mean. Great job of how love sometimes must be kept at a distance, and all we can do is dream. Charles

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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