My last blitz long now passed

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    My last blitz long now passed

    My last blitz long now passed

    Taronis – ‘00

     

    A field of mud in a November snow

    A grunt, a sprint, a smashing blow

    He laid in a heap in the cold

    Whistle blown, no flags

     

    Up for another run

    Fingers poised in the snow

    The smell of sweat and mud

    Glaring at the other side

     

    Cadence called, the snap is off

    A collision, stopped, defended well

    Muddied faces rejoice

    The ball changes hands

     

    A gray day, filthy and cold

    Long ago, as the center of the line

    Covered in mud, and sweat, and blood

    Battling in the snow

     

    A high school player, a defender

    I remember those days and bear the scars

    I miss the game, the fury, the rush

    My last blitz long now passed

     

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    ginga commented on My last blitz long now passed

    12-23-2009

    Ta, An interesting memory poem recalling a game once played. I can feel your passion for the game all the way through. ginga

    MootPoint commented on My last blitz long now passed

    06-26-2009

    Getting Old's a baitch aint it? Okay rate mine now.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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