I'm Just Love Sick

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  • Love
    • Robin
    • Even if you are on the right track, you’ll get run over if you just sit there.

    I'm Just Love Sick

    I can't eat I can't sleep
    Thoughts of you are so deep
    My head spins my heart aches
    My bodies numb for heaven sakes
    I walk around with head low
    I hear your voice everywhere I go
    I see your face in clouds above
    So they say I'm just sick with love

    Wind blows gently in my hair
    Makes me feel that you were there
    A man and woman in the park
    Sitting on the bench after dark
    Holds her hand looks in her eyes
    Makes me know and realize
    How I long for your sweet kiss
    So they say I'm just love sick

    When I'm sitting home alone
    Waiting by the telephone
    In my throat there is a lump
    Every sound makes me jump
    Beating of my heart in fast mode
    Sometimes I think it will explode
    Many things I'm feeling thereof
    So they say I’m just sick with love

    Toss and turn all night long
    I’m not feeling very strong
    In the morning moving slow
    Seems I've lost my get up go
    I’ve lost track of the date
    But for you I’ll surely wait
    How much more can I take of this
    So they say I'm just love sick


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    Vincent commented on I'm Just Love Sick

    11-14-2008

    Hi, good poem.

    quietlypoetic commented on I'm Just Love Sick

    11-10-2008

    Not tight, less expressive - I think the emotions you express are much sharper than you are telling us in a rather dull rhyme

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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