It Only Takes

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    It Only Takes
    Just one thought creates a thousand tears.
    And all I have to show for it
    is a face,
    streaked with experience.

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    poett commented on It Only Takes

    05-26-2009

    This is so beautiful and true. i enjoyed reading your poetry i shall return later for more thanks for sharing your talent....
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    mspoetris

    05/30/2009

    Thank you very much. I shall also do the same. I really liked your post on Hell Posted

    lightcourier commented on It Only Takes

    05-04-2009

    Another one of your nice haiku like poems. Beautiful in its simplicity. Thanks!
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    EbonyQueen48 commented on It Only Takes

    03-29-2009

    THIS IS POETRY!!! READ MY STUFF & LEAVE A COMMENT, i WOULD LOVE TO BE A FRIEND
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    ltroxell commented on It Only Takes

    03-15-2009

    A face streaked with experience is a beautiful thing.
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    dahlusion commented on It Only Takes

    02-13-2009

    Fabulous little gem. Took me by surprise, leaving my mouth hanging open…
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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