It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

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  • pocketofdreams6
  • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

Serendipity and pink petals
Pretty penumbra of pastiche
Here I appear with pure clarity
On my log raft along the Susquehanna
Chatoyant such a cynosure
The efflorescence  of love in bucolic
Lilt halcyon on my agarwood stage
Dulcet and felicity, a beautiful elixir
Sempiternal, summery of  wherewithal
Eloquence is an ephemeral, an elision
The illusion of sentences that do not make sense
For this is not meant to be understood
This is beauty, the sounds of syllables.

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ginga commented on It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

05-18-2010

Pocket, It sure is beautiful and it does not matter the sense part that is. Loved it as my tongue, teeth and lips sputtered along each emphatic line. ginga

Rhymer commented on It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

05-01-2010

You obviously have an excellent command of the english vocabulary, If your love can undestand this well written piece she will love the thought. I had to look op a lot of the words myself.....10

pocketofdreams6 commented on It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

05-01-2010

I wrote a poem to a girl I'm falling in love with; she is one of the most beautiful girls I have ever met, inside and out. What I decided to do what to look up the 100 most beautiful english words and they way they are said. Most of the words I did not understand because they were of a high level of vocabulary, but if you were to see the definition of the words, the poem would be extremely beautiful, although when read, it's not meant to be interpreted as beautiful because most people would not understand it, but the syllables themselves are beautiful together, and in order to truly love someone, you have to understand the hidden codes of someones, and sometimes it is not what they say, it's what you hear by the way they say it.

pocketofdreams6

05/02/2010

I apparently was fucked up when I wrote that comment on my poem; I misspelled like one million words, haha

SuSpence commented on It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

05-01-2010

This is beautiful, as I told you, if she can understand this she will melt. Wonderfully thought out write. Had to hit dictionary.com a couple of times lol, but everything fit perfectly. The flow in the rhyme and meter are as sweet as this poems intent. -Spence

josephbivin commented on It's Just Sounds and Syllables When I Say I Love You

05-01-2010

A very short poem, but so much was said in those few words. Very good!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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