Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

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  • pocketofdreams6
  • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

In my twelve bedroom house, there will be a bathroom with no mirrors, and no showers.  This is because room number one is the shower room; to describe the shower room the architectural design can be explained like this:  The Ceiling is silver with small stainless steel shower holes all the way across the thirty-five by fifty square foot room, directions; simply turn on the switch, and turn the knob to preset your perfect heaven like temperature.  There will be sub-standard couches according to the elitist, but they will be covered by a rare waterproof plastic that molds to the fibers of golden cloth, soundless so synthetic it’s real.  A place where you can lounge around and still clean yourself with the highly expensive and exotic shampoos and soaps, a place where you pull the recliner back as if you were ejecting from a fighter airplane.  Then watch the large flat screen built within the fiberglass walls; the floors are made of mirrors, so that when the photographic memory is in pause as you look down, it appears as though the shower water is shooting up from the ground.  Internalize and meditate, as you feel the multi-colored bath salts begin cleansing from the outside in, in and out, we make out, and make love on the occasion, but we prefer to do that in another special room, but the showers are wonderful.  Once you are the cleanest you can possibly be, you turn the shower switch off, open a wooden red oak door, and step through a forty foot hallway that is the most highest technologically advanced built-in home sauna in the history of mankind.  When you reach the end, there is a rack of pearl white towels, dab the damp spots, then slip into your dingy clean clothes, and now you are clean; and the best part about this room is the room that surrounds room number one, and that’s room number two - The Dolphin Tank

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Springsize commented on Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

04-15-2010

You have written a very Unique view here. I was not able to tell if this is one's home or the Aquarium at Marine Land. Really, really, very authentic with New and I also will look for more of your room view.... nice strange descriptions too.

MindNumbing commented on Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

04-15-2010

I gotta agree with Artie & SuSpence... I want to see more of this house!! We really are that pretentious, though aren't we?? I work in the building industry and see it daily... people designate "bedrooms" for their pets, complete with marble walls with built in nooks for food dishes... money makes otherwise perfectly sane people into complete idiots. That being said, I think I'd dig the hell out of a shower room with mirrors on the floor ;) LOL!

summerrose35 commented on Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

04-15-2010

lol great imagination...except the mirrors on the floor...lol

Artie commented on Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

04-15-2010

Yeah definitely room for a sequel lol - this is a great piece filled with plenty of imagination - 10 from me

SuSpence commented on Within My 12 Bedroom House, There is a Shower Room

04-15-2010

Very descriptive, you could do followups on this and do a poem for each room and keep it going. And the final room can reveal that this is thier own personal hell, that all the money in the world could not buy them love, personality, or companionship haha

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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