Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


  • pocketofdreams6
  • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist

We produce exposure, with our vane face on a ten foot poster, an impostor of importance, hey look at me fly!  I can’t even see your faces on the surface of the earth, but you produce exposure, not for the talented, not for the artistic, but for the beautiful features - they break down like a lemon.  This is my major complaint about music, the radio is not the sounds of artists, but five puppets in which they pull the finger strings of the puppets who pull the strings with it’s guitar, or how about the big business rapper, who repeatedly threads a theme into your head that gives you a downloaded thought that thinks, “I am better than you are!”  Oh really you are?  Napoleon soul syndrome, I ask myself what is music, raw and real, expressed with abstract rhythms, we’re bring Picasso back to life to wring and sing for us, the real people left in the world, and to understand what the real people go through in this world, and all the beauty realness brings, but music should not be vane, greedy, and needy for attention, what I’m saying is fuck promotion, if they notice they notice, and those who do shape your soul.  

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hippiegirl commented on Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


glad i found this, it's great. i completely agree with you...well written

dumplin commented on Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


Despite several spelling errors, I was able to grasp your view of music. Music is the source of my heartbeat. My philosophy about music is that if I could take just one person's mind off of their troubles for one 3 or 4 minute song and make them happy for that time, I've achieved my goal. To do this for the masses would be a blessing.

MindNumbing commented on Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


As a music fanatic, this strikes a chord with me and I have to applaud your conviction! Music loses part of its soul when it's combined with big business. That's been the case for decades, I think... but our growing tendencies of vanity and greed alike are escalating the process. Bravo to you for wrapping it up in this brilliant package... maybe someone will think differently before they pay their hard-earned cash on the 'next big thing' just because they think they're supposed to.

Mandi commented on Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


okay that nust be why,,,,okay I get it' you actually want me to think. i am not his deep

SuSpence commented on Red Music Notes Dripping from my Slit Wrist


Great theme, I love it man! I have often said this but not in so many words or so elequently, what has happened to the artist these days? The likes of Brittany Spears & Jessica Simpson are labeled as 'artists' these days its a JOKE! In society today someone like Janis Joplin or Jim Croce would never stand a chance because of thier looks no label would pick them up. How many artists are we missing out on because the suits say they are not 'marketable'? Who the hell are they to say who or what is marketable. I'll tell you what marketable is, Truth and Passion, always has been and always will be.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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