Amber The Tiger

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  • pocketofdreams6
  • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

Amber The Tiger

I loathe in my attachment, my attraction to my tiger, my tiger, the appellation I cherish to rouse her, yet I do not possess, my antsy gloom alone musing over her caress, the time between times I don’t behold her I perceive myself under water confined of oxygen, and the moment my eyes grasp hers, I gasp for breath with a kiss of lips I wish to make mine, my only fountain, I’ve spent but only five nights in heaven, and I anguish of never being there again, my detached emotion I’ve been governed to, have I been used, for the better words of lack of dependency, or am I over analyzing, over analytical I am, I admit, but I’m still frightened lying still in an empty bed of false death and silence, hold steady, stay calm, stay quaint, stay cool, I apprise myself, but my feelings are overwhelming as she brings out this fire within me, honesty it hurts, hung up on possible loss, All through my life I never understood the man who would want someone who does not want him, who may not feel the same emotions, but now I do, but maybe she does, as I drift across this ocean to find new frontiers of love and tears.

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kmooney commented on Amber The Tiger

07-15-2009

Another interesting work by my man Richie - Pocketofdreams6. Again, a Jackson Pollock-ess work of poetic art. You astound me. I have the hardest time trying to follow your train of thought. I find myself reading and re-reading your poems several times before anything starts to make sense. I'm not sure it ever really does (lol). So I have just quit trying to follow your train and simply jumped on board. I assume Amber is, or was, an aquaintance of yours, in the female sense. I also assume that you like, or liked, her more than you assumed she likes, or liked, you. I appreciate your use of imagery and the passion with which you write. We, as men, can surely relate to the "forbidden fruit" of a woman who only sees us as mere mortals, or as proverbial "friends". There are certainly many females that I have had pleasure with in my lifetime, that I would love to "put away for a rainy day" so to speak. To enjoy their ecstacy on a more regular basis. I yearn for the touch of women that I have had in the past, to be able to relive all those tender moments in future single-sittings. And yes, if I had to choose, there was one special person, one "apple of my eye", that I think about time and time again. She was my Amber the Tiger, my forbidden fruit. But alas, that boat has sailed and she is now only a figment of my sexual fantasied past (present) - whatever. I don't know if I hit the nail on the head with this one but it certainly did arouse my interest. Good work again. Be sure to keep me in the loop.... K

scrye commented on Amber The Tiger

07-14-2009

An emotional must. This is really putting yourself out there. I loved it and you must feel real deep emotions and confusion. I see confusion. A real good read and a 10 from me.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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