Life that never was

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Life that never was

    I see you an old woman

    I hear your trembling voice

    A faint, illusive vision,

    A life that never was.

     

    I turn your palm toward me

    The lines that run across

    Do tell a tender story,

    A life that never was.

     

    So much that I desired

    Has never felt so close,

    We met, we wed, retired,

    A life that never was.


    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    cousinsoren commented on Life that never was

    04-22-2010

    "We met, we wed, retired,/ A life that never was," Regret was never so well expressed as this, My rating for perfect versification, pathos and diction is a full 10.

    Gracey commented on Life that never was

    07-19-2009

    This is very powerful. I like the idea and find it very strong. Is this a woman who you loved and lost?..becos this is what I get from this writing. I love the flow. It runs smoothly I like the fact you do not elaborate on who the woman is becos of course she doesn't exists. Veryy good.

    Sleeves

    07/19/2009

    Thanks Gracey!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Sleeves’s Poems (23)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    memories 0
    album 0
    turquoise 1
    delusion 0
    cold 1
    wife 0
    imprinted 0
    sepia 2
    emerge 1
    gravity 0
    Two haikus 0
    Strips 7
    The lone wheat 3
    Life that never was 3
    Tide 4
    I awake 5
    Lúthien 5
    Gone with the whales 2
    Picture 3
    Perfect looks 2
    You, here 3
    Scarred 5
    Fade 1