Scarred

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    Scarred

    Of all the beauties in the World
    The one that I adore
    To me, is like a deity-girl,
    A muse, but only more.

    I do not hope it means to you
    Something enough to care,
    But settle for the pleasant view
    And think it only fair;

    However long my path will be
    Across the maze of time,
    I'll bear the mark you've left on me
    And say: it's only fine.

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    cousinsoren commented on Scarred

    10-24-2009

    This little piece relates to the traditional ballad genre. Its a perfect poettic gem. Its muscality is exquisite. This little ballad can be easily set to music and sung to the acompaniment of a guitar or accordian , without any alteration. I actually sang it! ................................................lol If Sleece, cannot play a guitar., I suggst that he should get one and learn to play it. He is a natural with the ballad form of poetry. Write on, Sleeve! My rating is 10++

    Sleeves

    10/24/2009

    Thanks Oren, your comments and criticism are always appreciated.

    amaranthus commented on Scarred

    05-15-2009

    This is beautiful... quite moving... :)

    nickyssecrets commented on Scarred

    05-13-2009

    Your style is really lovely, I enjoy the flow of your poetry and the pictures you paint with it. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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