Picture

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  • Emotional

    Picture

    trapped in a moment - frozen

    never wanting to move

    until I stop believing it could last

    for ever.

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    lustfulsoul commented on Picture

    08-04-2009

    This piece bleeds a sense of emotional madness. The frozen moments within our hearts are often believed to be controlled. Sort of like a portrait, until we stop believing that they can last forever :)) Outstanding job!

    Sleeves

    10/13/2009

    Funny I never thought this one would get any comments, let alone high rating :) Thank you!

    nickyssecrets commented on Picture

    05-05-2009

    I like that it is so brief. Brief and powerful. Well done. Thank you for sharing!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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