Messed Up

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  • Lost Love

    Messed Up

     

    Came home and wasn’t alone

    Had too much to drink

    Groggy—head all mixed up

    Don’t touch me—NO!

    Don’t you fucking dare

    Touch me—I hate you

    I hate you—I’m going to kill you

    Don’t do that

    Why can’t I move—what

    Have you done—you dumb

    Bastard—I’m going to kill you

    Get off—don’t touch me

    I hate you

    Some one help me—please

    Help me!

    It happened – it really did

    Please believe me—it wasn’t

    My fault—I tried to stop him

    I did…

    Fine go- be that way

    Take the ring with you.

     

    Rape- it’s just a four letter

    Word- what harm is there in that

    A lot—destroyed my life-

    Took everything from me

    Don’t touch me—I don’t trust you.

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    jademelissa74 commented on Messed Up

    08-10-2009

    Each line bleeds the pain created throughout the entire piece. One can take what we don't want to give, yet the peace that reigns within in knowing that he will get his is soothing. I can not begin to convey how yor words pierced my heart, I can only tell you that I am truly sorry for your loss and that the anger you feel is well granted. Lean not into your own understanding. This piece is well-written and presented. Outstanding job.
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    CherokeePrinces

    08/11/2009

    Thank you. I recently took a psych. class and was able to stand up and talk about it with out crying. I knew I was ready to let people read about it. It felt so good to be able to do that.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Messed Up

    08-09-2009

    this is a really good poem....and yes it is a living hell to go through this bullshit......more than many of us will ever know....until you have something so personal taken from you that can never be given back.......then you don't know it.....so don't judge it......I'm sorry this happened to you and will include you in my prayers to be able to put the anger away...a 10
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    CherokeePrinces

    08/09/2009

    Thank you. I have tried to put it behind me and have gone on with my life. Putting it down on paper has really helped and putting it out there for people to see and read has helped even more. I just wanted to say thank you.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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