God isn't a Hitman

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    God isn't a Hitman

     God isn't a hitman
    Then who is this man
    At my door
    Who says my life
    Is at an end
    My messenger
    At my door
    Presenting me
    With my passage
    What can I say?
    What can I do?
    To lengthen
    My journey.
    God isn't a hitman
    He simply presents
    To you a question
    Will you stay
    Or will you go?

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    CasimirJash commented on God isn't a Hitman

    08-25-2009

    true, I've always wonder if you are near death, does it ask you if you prefer to stay or go. I would say go, if it was to a better place, or stay and change my life around into something better.
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    CherokeePrinces

    08/25/2009

    very true if I had the choice I would most likely pick go. I'm glad you liked it.

    Phoenix9 commented on God isn't a Hitman

    08-25-2009

    simple and tom the point, very nice, and do we really ever want to leave
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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