MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

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    MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

    The doctor walks out defeated,
    Forced to question his calling again.
    As the door abruptly closes on Room 273,
    The Spirit persistently demands His way in.

    All dressed up for Death’s arrival,
    People all around,
    Body not yet cold,
    Satan has counted her for the ground.

    Consecrating this throne of doubt,
    With thoughts of Faith and Hope.
    Maintaining a reasonable measure of expectation;
    Something not identifiable by a keenly positioned stethoscope.

    It happened just like that!
    Death’s treasured possession stripped away.

    Instead of recording time of death,
    They would boastfully testify and say,
    That in Room 273,
    We witnessed a Miracle this day.

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    jandh4ever commented on MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

    06-17-2009

    Wow. This poem is amazing. I love the poem. I have do agree with AshRenee on that one. I would have thought that the poem was about a birth
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    orsonav

    06/18/2009

    Thank you for commenting on this poem. This poem is about the wonderful miracles that God is capable of producing. Child Birth is also a great miracle of God.

    AshRenee commented on MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

    06-17-2009

    Hmmm, when I read the title, I thought it would be about childbirth. But it's not. And I like it. It's better this way that the reader expects tragedy at the begining, despite the title.
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    orsonav

    06/18/2009

    Thank you for reading my work. This poem is indeed about the wonderful miracles that God is capable of producing, and Child Birth is one of those miracles.

    Paradice21 commented on MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

    01-28-2009

    I would agree with lonewolf this poem as nicely done and written. Gave life instead of death back into this soul/person.
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    lonewolf commented on MIRACLE IN ROOM 273

    01-26-2009

    I would never have thought to write a poem like this. I'm glad you did. Well done.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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