PARAMEDIC

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    PARAMEDIC

    came into my world
    showed me im his girl
    showed me some new things
    feelin like im on his team...
    thought me how to be
    loving and happy
    took away the misery
    something i call my history...
    gave me better days
    completed i shall say
    important thats what im going to be
    in his eyes thats all i need.... original and personality
    well we think the same
    im that puzzle within the frame
    drama, chaos, and stupidity
    tell me which one do yall want to see...
    flashes of those days
    when i go insane
    unable to be the listener
    cause i was depending on the whistler.....
    urgent to my needs
    satisfied yes and deed
    he's my paramedic, trust me i wont foget it....saving me from my headache...

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    cryptic77 commented on PARAMEDIC

    06-18-2009

    I think that you are forcing a rhyme... say what you want to say without reading it..if you let it flow it will feel less forced to read.... tell me what you think.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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