THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

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THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

he couldn't take the way u was shining through
he couldn't realize all the good came true..
so he took ur life thinkin it would be cool,
to release the pressure that was fallin so true..
well he thought someday he would over come u
lead u in the dark, got u feelin so blue
and all along got u thinkin he still lovin u
fightin every night, you know this shit aint cool
you know someday ur that women who's gonna lose her cool
walked up in the kitchen got those thoughts running like fuel
u wonder what he would do if he caught u
pondering over that knife cause tonight u want to be through ...
but u decide u could really walk away
leave shit behind as long as ur life dont remain the same
but some reason he dont want to let go
cant realize these tears are coming from the soul..
slamming the door, pushing u up against the wall
yelling some more.. baby u wont leave me for sure...
kicking u down to the ground like ur a dog
spiting on u all in ur face asking u do u want more..
moving around trying to get away for sure..
their were some things u never knew girl
he kept a weapon underneath his computer
thinking ur close to something that people ENTER...
got shot down.. its burning and it hurts.....
the look on his face.. he knew he hurt her
wont say he's sorry because he never loved her..
walked away like it didnt hurt him
told the cops it could of been one of his friends...
cause she was cheating and miss leading me once again....

here is another man who gets away with this...
no real pain because he never felt a real kiss
here lies a women who could of had his kids
change his world around but now he lost his gift..
i wonder someday would he ever pay for this
dont walk my way cause nigga trust me i wont miss..
give u the pain u gave her.. u thought u were the shit..
wont hit another nigga cause he was too big..
these are the stories of a women bullshit.

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BlaQReign commented on THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

10-08-2009

The conten with in this was true to life, and I, enjoyed the read...BlaQ

purplekisses

10/16/2009

thanks

orangepony commented on THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

07-19-2009

Thank you,purple kissess,words of your expression how a woman feels in this type of relationship its so very true,for woman who have gone through this, its just scars that never leave us,but we do know there will be a better day than this one,cause there are people like you,who pray for us and care for us,knowing god is looking out for us.for those who know you,they are so very lucky to have you as a friend. I wish you and your friends the best of luck in life.orange pony

purplekisses

07/22/2009

awww my god.. that was so sweet of u to say that.. i mean that.. thank u

fawndesno10 commented on THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

06-17-2009

oh my gosh this is a great poem i am really feelin this one....you should be a famous poet with the things you write.

purplekisses

06/18/2009

really.. omg thank u so much.. i really try to wite great things.. thank u that means alot to me..

edgee commented on THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT

06-17-2009

i appreciate you writing this becuz it takes courage and knowledge....i would like to add you as a friuend becuz i would really like to know what inspired you to write this....i really wanna know

purplekisses

06/17/2009

to tell the truth.. i have a lot of friends who go through things like this.. and i just wanted to let the world know what a women is really thinkin...i also write on my facebook page... i love to write poems ..songs.. and i enjoy people telling me their stories and letting me write their feelings on paper..

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER 4
UNOFFICIAL 0
IMMA COME OVER... 2
i'll be loving you 1
ur gonna lose me part 2 5
we got it 0
F.R.I.E.N.D 3
no jumpoff 0
so u want to know what i think about u 3
how do u tell a man u think ur in love with him... when u just met him 0
ur gonna lose me part 1 1
u will be mine 0
im not the one for this 0
DAYDREAMING 6
ERASED UR PAIN 0
QUESTION 0
NO LIMITATIONS 1
I WISH 3
MAKE UP OR BRAKE UP 0
AS I LAY 3
NEVER KNEW 0
HE BROKE IT OFF WITH ME 1
REPLACEMENT 2
THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT 4
PARAMEDIC 1
IF I COULD CHANGE 1