so u want to know what i think about u

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    so u want to know what i think about u

    so u wanna know
    what I think about u.
    I think about the time when u and I was really true.
    we was together never fell apart and u knew..
    untill u left me boy
    who even knew..
    so u went away but the love still stayed and u knew..
    so u come back around and u see me smile
    things aint the say boy..
    so u keep it on a low because u know I know that ur feelin me..
    just remember I know that u know...baby u need me..
    in the sky like a eagel
    im going to fly.. fly solo
    and im going to be on my own
    and i dont need u and thats for sure
    still u want to how how i feel about u
    i was with u boy and u lost me
    because of u
    u didnt hear me out but u heard them out
    and u knew..
    he was flurting with me .. he wanted to be with me and u knew who...
    u didnt say a word so i got hurt.. by u
    so i left u alone ... now ur alone now what are u going to do boy..
    u see now im happy and i dont need u with me
    im going to keep my head high.. never let it low
    baby u know me..


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    ChiefBoy35 commented on so u want to know what i think about u

    07-08-2009

    The words of a black woman full of disappointment and anger. I ;ile this poem because there are some much raw emotions flowing from your words.

    purplekisses

    07/09/2009

    thank u

    DeepEclipse commented on so u want to know what i think about u

    07-07-2009

    Sounds songlike. Could actually use a chorus, if you think it necessary. A lot of "you"'s in there, hahahah but i get the feeling you meant to do that. Sometimes they gotta know that they areen't needed for happiness. They are merely a benefit.

    purplekisses

    07/07/2009

    sososo.... true..lol

    WordSlinger commented on so u want to know what i think about u

    07-03-2009

    Love is a precious thing, and when the bell rings, they here the momma sing, not knowing what i bring, that;s what I feel

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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