I WISH

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    I WISH

    MR:

    i wish i were your pillow, so you would hold me tight.
    i wish i were invisible, so i could watch you sleep at night.
    i wish i was the sun, so i could warm you with my rays.
    i wish i were the rain, so i could brush upon your face..
    I'd wish on every star, to have just one wish come true, so i could be with you.

    MRS:

    i wish i was the one who can whisper in ur ear
    say something sweet baby im glad to have u near
    i wish i was the one u can call through the night
    come closer love everything will be alright
    i wish i was ur lover.. more then a friend
    i wish i could discover ..how u can love again
    i wish i was the one...i wish i was his number one..

    MR:

    if i could catch a rainbow i would do it just for you
    and share with you its beauty on the days you are feeling blue
    if i could build a mountain you could call your very own
    a place to find serenity a place to be alone
    if i could take your troubles i would toss them in the sea
    but all these things i am finding are impossible for me
    i cannot build a mountain or catch a rainbow fair
    but let me be what i know best a friend thats always there.

    MRS:

    i wish i could tell u all my troubles babe
    but love for me has its limits ...limitations all the way
    i wish i could pump out all this growing pain
    so i could find serenity.. a place to eased the pain
    i wish i could resolve and find the leading caused
    for why im wishing on a star thats pushed away so far..
    i wish i was the one... but im not the lucky one...

    MR:

    you could tell me your troubles
    my love for you have no limits
    you could tell me about your pain
    cause im here to ease it..
    there are no mountains that i cant climb to get to you my love
    there is no way that im gonna find someone to replace ur love
    there is no one in this world that can defined the way i feel
    there would never be another girl who complete my soul for real

    MRS:

    i wish i was ur pillow, so u could hold me tight
    i wish i wasnt invisible.. so u can watch me sleep at night
    i wish u were my sun so u can dry up all this rain
    i wish u were the one to keep me from memory lane....

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    Romano commented on I WISH

    06-29-2009

    nice, Mr.'s second verse i have heard and read somewhere b4 just cant place it, yet i like how you incorporated into your work

    purplekisses

    07/03/2009

    well that poem is mine i wrote the whole thing myself and i have it on my facebook page so maybe ur on my friend list on face book

    LIFEWILL commented on I WISH

    06-18-2009

    ok i like it... its sounds almost like a song hook. a very long one but i song hook. keep writing i will check out some more of yours

    cryptic77 commented on I WISH

    06-18-2009

    I thinking that this is upside down? And read it i think that it would work. Try it and tell me what you think.. how does it read...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    purplekisses’s Poems (26)

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    QUESTION 0
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    NEVER KNEW 0
    HE BROKE IT OFF WITH ME 1
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