ur gonna lose me part 2

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    ur gonna lose me part 2

     how many days, how many ways.
    we go through this
    within the hour u send me flowers and expect me to forget
    all the shit u put me through
    and still i wont let go of u
    we fuss and fight and that aint right
    and still i stay true to u
    how amny days, how many ways
    im gonna cry
    sitting her everynight thinking god knows why
    why i stay with u and i know i need to go
    and my heart is crying out for new love and it shows
    cant believe someday i would have to say to u..
    u better change ur ways cause baby u will lose...
    ur gonna lose me

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    1990lh commented on ur gonna lose me part 2

    07-18-2009

    love your poem you did a really great job and u will be loved
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    purplekisses

    07/22/2009

    thanks

    cliftondurant commented on ur gonna lose me part 2

    07-18-2009

    you deserve to be love as you love everyone deserve to be love and you must demand it great job
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    purplekisses

    07/22/2009

    thanks

    origionalmerlin commented on ur gonna lose me part 2

    07-18-2009

    good word choice (spellcheck twice somtimes it fowls up) structure and emotion come through well a good write
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    purplekisses

    07/18/2009

    thank u i will keep that in mind

    Tempestlady commented on ur gonna lose me part 2

    07-14-2009

    Very good portrayal of being stuck between a rock ad a hard place. liked the rhyme, liked the message, i would advise you to work n form, and technique. Play with meter, and rhythm. Good write though.
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    purplekisses

    07/18/2009

    wow thanks.. i put a lot into that

    SuSpence commented on ur gonna lose me part 2

    07-07-2009

    Very good display of emotion and anger. You were really able to capture your feelings, and it reminds us that action truly do speak louder than words or flowers (gifts) ever will.
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    purplekisses

    07/07/2009

    lol very true..lol

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