DAYDREAMING

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    DAYDREAMING

     SITIN HERE WAITIN BY THE PHONE
    WAITIN FOR IT TO RING
    GOT THIS PERSOn ON MY MINE
    TAKIN ALL MY TIME IT SEEMED
    ENJOYIN EVERY MOMENT OF THE DAY
    WHEN HE CAME AROUND ME
    SO NOW HE GOT THE NUMBER
    LETS SEE WHAT HE'S GANNA BE
    CAUSE I...

    BEEN DAY DREAMIN ABOUT U
    COMIN IN MY ROOM
    LATE NIGHT LIKE ITS COOL
    CAN U LAY BESIDE ME
    CAUSE I NEED U BY ME
    IM DAY DREAMIN
    IM WAITIN FOR U TO CALL...
    BEEN DAY DREAMIN ABOUT U
    LOVIN ME DOWN ALL THE WAY AND ITS COOL..
    CAN U LAY BESIDE ME CAUSE I NEED U BY ME
    IM DAY DREAMIN IM WAITIN FOR U TO CALL...

    LOOKIN AT MY CLOCK
    ITS ALMOST THAT TIME
    CAN U COME OVER AND PASS ME SOME TIME...
    WONDER WHERE U AT..
    WONDER WHERE YOU'VE BEEN..
    IS THEIR SOMEONE THAT IS MORE IMPORTANT..
    U SAY SAY IM UR LOVER
    U SAY IM UR FRIEND
    U SAY BABY DONT U WORRIE ABOUT A THING..
    AS LONG AS U ARE WITH ME UR GONNA BE MY BABY
    IM STILL SITTIN HER DAY DREAMIN...
    CAUSE I....

    BEEN DAY DREAMIN ABOUT U
    COMIN IN MY ROOM LATE NIGHT
    LIKE ITS COOL
    CAN U LAY BESIDE ME CAUSE I NEED U BY ME
    IM DAY DREAMIN
    IM WAITIN FOR U TO CALL...

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    SuSpence commented on DAYDREAMING

    07-07-2009

    Great work! It works well as poetry, but when I read this I hear music it in my head as if this should be a song. Also the theme grabs the reader as it is so relatable. I felt myself feeling the emotions you convery with your words as I read, almost as if I am reliving it myself.
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    purplekisses

    07/07/2009

    aww wow.. every one say it should be a song.. and i do sing so i think imma make it a song.. thank u.. please keep reading.. i write from the soul

    edgee commented on DAYDREAMING

    06-26-2009

    oh and one other thing.....you write your poetry the way and style you wanna write it, if you want all caps then you do all caps, dont let nobody tell you how to write what you wnat, they dont like the way you do it, then they dont have to read it.....but you got your talent, not nobody else's so you be you and you do you and let them do them....
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    purplekisses

    06/27/2009

    yhank u so much

    edgee commented on DAYDREAMING

    06-26-2009

    love this, love the way you took yourwords and made them tell your story....would love for you to keep up with your talent.....
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    purplekisses

    06/27/2009

    thank u so much

    SILKYTWEED commented on DAYDREAMING

    06-24-2009

    Nice Write....I like the flow and style you used...I hope that day dream turns into a reality if it hasn't already (smile)...Thanks for sharing...I enjoyed reading this piece!
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    purplekisses

    06/27/2009

    thank u so much

    fawndesno10 commented on DAYDREAMING

    06-17-2009

    omg gurl this poem is sooooo good i can relate to that shit...you keep it up girl you got talent....
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    purplekisses

    06/18/2009

    omg.. thank u so much...

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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