F.R.I.E.N.D

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F.R.I.E.N.D

she was my F.R.I.E.N.D
he was my F.R.I.E.N.D
can't denied how he was lovin me
all the time lovin me so
sexually
she was my F.R.I.E.N.D
and he became my boyfriend can't u see
and they both denied
sleepin sexually
and they both denied
going to see a movie
and they both denied
meetin up at the telle
stood across the street
as they walked passed me
I sit and cried as I watched them creep..
holdin her hand
as if she was me
how could she love
a man that once loved me
I knew this girl since we were 13
but she was my....
F.R.I.E.N.D
he became my ex boyfriend can't u see...
never thought that I
would have a man that would cheat....
I thought I had that good good
I was miss lead..
now she's gone..
now he's gone..
and I'm ok....

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cheohs commented on F.R.I.E.N.D

07-06-2009

You basically been through the same thing I have and it's nice to know that you got over it in the end. That's positive mami, keep writing, I'm feeling it.

purplekisses

07/07/2009

thank u so much

JERRICA commented on F.R.I.E.N.D

07-05-2009

I really liked reading this. Well said and put-together. It would work wonderful if put in motion.

purplekisses

07/07/2009

thank u so much

Chaos128 commented on F.R.I.E.N.D

07-03-2009

I know it sounds like a cliche, but the expression;"Whatever doesn't kill you makes you sronger." is really true. Believe me...I know. This is tight, expressive work, and i can tell it took a lot of will-power to write it. Very well done!

purplekisses

07/07/2009

awww thank u so much

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

purplekisses’s Poems (26)

Title Comments
Title Comments
THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER 4
UNOFFICIAL 0
IMMA COME OVER... 2
i'll be loving you 1
ur gonna lose me part 2 5
we got it 0
F.R.I.E.N.D 3
no jumpoff 0
so u want to know what i think about u 3
how do u tell a man u think ur in love with him... when u just met him 0
ur gonna lose me part 1 1
u will be mine 0
im not the one for this 0
DAYDREAMING 6
ERASED UR PAIN 0
QUESTION 0
NO LIMITATIONS 1
I WISH 3
MAKE UP OR BRAKE UP 0
AS I LAY 3
NEVER KNEW 0
HE BROKE IT OFF WITH ME 1
REPLACEMENT 2
THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT 4
PARAMEDIC 1
IF I COULD CHANGE 1