REPLACEMENT

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    REPLACEMENT

    i kinda like this person
    and i know he likes me..
    but when i try to give him my all..
    he pulls away like i dont matter at all
    when i call he dont answer and when he call i cant answer
    when i pull back , he comes harder
    when i lean forward .. he run farther
    dont want it to be a booty call cause my heart has grown..
    but i dont want to be the one sleeping alone..
    when im here .. he's their
    when i come around .. he disappear.
    what can i do to see the truth
    standing by the window hoping he would come through..
    friends saying he left her to be with u
    taking me out to dinner so he can forget out who was u..
    taking me to play's so he can forget about those day,
    where and when he met u..
    but i can see it in his face that i was only their to replace..
    replace the memory of u..

    my heart has grown for all the wrong reason..
    believing in this man and thinking i can please him..
    forgetting about the way he talked about u and had his reasons..
    night after night his feelings changing like the season..
    maybe he should of stayed .. maybe he should of left
    but for some reason ur the one he cant forget
    yet here he comes to me lying so peacefully
    and im the one who's upset...
    so is this my truth?
    am im really a replacement for u?
    cause it seems like ur the one who took over..
    and i just got the left over...

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    Chaos128 commented on REPLACEMENT

    06-17-2009

    I can't comment from a female perspective, but the course of love never runs smooth. You've expressed the frustration with a powerful, personal style. I'm impressed.

    purplekisses

    06/17/2009

    WOW THANK U SO MUCH.... I REALLY MEAN THAT..

    MsUnrestricted commented on REPLACEMENT

    06-16-2009

    Wow your poem just said everything I'm going through how I've been feeling but afraid to put it on paper because once i do I'll be fully able to let go and I kinda still wanna hold on....good poem

    purplekisses

    06/17/2009

    thank u so much.. that really makes me feel good that i could reach out to people and really touch reality...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    purplekisses’s Poems (26)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    THINGS COULD GET A LIL BETTER 4
    UNOFFICIAL 0
    IMMA COME OVER... 2
    i'll be loving you 1
    ur gonna lose me part 2 5
    we got it 0
    F.R.I.E.N.D 3
    no jumpoff 0
    so u want to know what i think about u 3
    how do u tell a man u think ur in love with him... when u just met him 0
    ur gonna lose me part 1 1
    u will be mine 0
    im not the one for this 0
    DAYDREAMING 6
    ERASED UR PAIN 0
    QUESTION 0
    NO LIMITATIONS 1
    I WISH 3
    MAKE UP OR BRAKE UP 0
    AS I LAY 3
    NEVER KNEW 0
    HE BROKE IT OFF WITH ME 1
    REPLACEMENT 2
    THE STORY OF A WOMEN BULL SHIT 4
    PARAMEDIC 1
    IF I COULD CHANGE 1