The Graveyard (New Ver.)

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a couple iffy parts but its ok

The Graveyard (New Ver.)

in an old church upon a hill
where kids go to seek a thrill
stands the monument, desperate totem
the dead rests around and beneath them

they say the dead start to walk about
eating anything soft or stout
few have seen and many have heard
but everyone has an opinion shared

one day many years ago
some crazy kids went up to throw
a party among the rotten tombs
beer and drugs lite up the moon

the cool breeze, dead leafs
bare trees, and dead things
as the teens danced to their favorite songs
fearing no one, not realizing somethings wrong

the dead rose form their graves and strode toward the dancers
drunk and high the teens didnt take notice of their new visitors
screams eruopted from the night as they all fell victem
their bodies were found deprived from flesh and eaten

the cultests unknown from the dead that were slayed
a mystery even beyond the eternal grave
many belive no human could have done this deed
police belive cultests did it with their unbreakable creed

the younger generation knew exactly whats true
some of the things they saw, if only the police knew
hikers and bikers there have vanished without a trace
the wicked dead swallowing souls setting the death count pace

the problem worsened when houses were built around it
police reports have never before been filled with such strange shit
and still people die, brave little children among them
their bones picked clean, foot prints all around 'em

walls went up to seal the old graveyard
some say to keep the dead in barred
some say otherwise, hey its up to you
take the dare, climb the fence, you'll know exactly whats true!

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chasitylake123 commented on The Graveyard (New Ver.)

11-15-2010

i like the fact that it is evil it fits my persona lol

WordSlinger commented on The Graveyard (New Ver.)

03-20-2010

This is awesome, I like it alot a very good write, ty WS

EvilPoems

03/20/2010

read a few of my other new ones?

Artie commented on The Graveyard (New Ver.)

03-20-2010

I like this - lots of fun to read your imagination at work - 10 from me

purdylox commented on The Graveyard (New Ver.)

03-20-2010

I hated this poem cuz it was about zombies and I am very scared of zombies. other than the topic it was agreatpoem spell check though it helps

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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