One last breath.. Before i die

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    Another title given to me by a friend, Hope you like the emo shit ^.^ i do >.>

    One last breath.. Before i die

     It's cold out here tonight
    the moon, so bright
    grass so green and smooth
    gentle wind, caressing to sooth

    I can feel the pain
    winter cold has yet to numb
    I'm cheating, what a shame
    heh, i wonder if they'll tihnk im dumb

    I wonder what they'll say about me
    laying here, bleeding under a tree
    when will they find me...
    in a week, in a day? an eternity?

    will i go to heaven for this...
    nah, im going to hell i know it
    life wasn't all fun and bliss
    infact is was the opposite

    so now i sit here bleeding to death
    when will i draw my final breath?
    i wont even try to fight
    It's cold out here tonight

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    MarionYost commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    01-29-2010

    This write is very true, I know I've been there more than a few times. (Unfortunately) nice job with this one. All the best -Marion-
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    EvilPoems

    02/09/2010

    eh, so have I

    Fallenangel87 commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    01-29-2010

    I can definitely relate to this write. Nice flow. good job with this one all the best -fallenangel87-
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    stever commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    12-29-2009

    wow another great poem...i seen you wanted title 4 new poems i was gonna use this as a band name [chainsaw suicide]
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    PoetsofBlood commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    12-15-2009

    This is a heart wretching metephore, perfectly written to eval life and the cold hearted response of human ignorance! Alexia's heart bleeds for you in this write-here my lil'horror minion, let me drip some warm blood in a cup for you-to help keep ya warm..see I'm not so evil,after all!-wink,Alexia
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    EvilPoems

    12/15/2009

    i love the taste of blood...

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