The secret

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In the words of piano man Billy Joel: "honesty is such a lonely word". This poem reflects a reality much to often lived in our society, by people just like us. Sad, but true.

The secret

There is a wife today

busy with the daily chores:

folding linen,

packing lunches,

choosing the home décor.

There is a husband overseas

lying by his mistress

while his soul finds no rest.

Money spills from his wallet.

His unsuspecting wife is proud of his crowns

She doesn’t know

How lost is his soul.

The love they shared he has traded

for the logo of his corporation,

profit his solo motivation.

Monetary kingdom, bribery and lies.

Betrayed sanctum,

smiles that soon will dissipate.

Every step, a misguide.

There is a wife today

Whose tears will wash the face

melting into an ocean of pain,

children to be disposed of

the world they have known.

There is a husband

who lost his soul.

Will he ever find his way home?

 

Sandra Lira Rodrigues

January 2010

 

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Musicmynded1 commented on The secret

02-24-2010

Makes me be very glad and proud of my midioker day job in my own hometown, never trying to keep up with the Burbs or even know them folks,,, good write:)

mariadapoesia

03/02/2010

Love your comment! Thanks and come back to visit me here...

Zenwitchfaery commented on The secret

02-12-2010

wow I got chills when I read this one I could feel it! although I have not experianced that situation. well written poem!

Hampton commented on The secret

02-08-2010

I fell in love with this poem Sandra. Your expressive writing ability is a gift.

mariadapoesia

02/09/2010

Dear Mr. hampton, your comment is of uttermost value to me. Thanks for your time and opinion. I feel flattered you fell in love with my poem! TY!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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