Torment Of The Soul

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Torment Of The Soul

As Living, breathing, Human Beings.
We all have desirs and needs
Which Must be fulfilled,
If we are to live lfe,
As it was Meant to be lived.

For when our desires are un-met,
And our needs, Go unfulfilled.
It creates such a Vast
And Dark emptiness within our hearts,
And such a deep and unrelenting pain,
That Even our Souls feel the Torment

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whyfi commented on Torment Of The Soul

02-09-2009

well put

Phoenix9 commented on Torment Of The Soul

02-09-2009

well done good message

bforibus commented on Torment Of The Soul

02-07-2009

i have felt this and prayed for forgiveness because i lost sight if the important shit. very good write. loved the painting

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

dave005’s Poems (11)

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FATE AND DESTINY 1
My Unanswered Prayer 3
Looking Ahead - Not Back 6
Forget Me Not 7
Torment Of The Soul 4
A Childs Nightmare 4
The Coming Of Night 4
A Child Is Coming 2
From A Boy To A Man 9
A Child Of Abuse 6
I Love You Mommy 3